User talk:Waritta
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Good job playing with the sandbox pages. Don't forget to make an edit to a real Wiki page now.
- DJKS 20:46, 1 Jul 2004 (UTC)
Assignment 4
Thanks for your minor addition to the Bird Macintyre page. Now make a significant contribution to another Wikipedia page (a new section or at least a new paragraph.) Please see the instructions on http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kaisersanders/ELP127 for more information or contact me.
- DJKS 14:45, 19 Jul 2004 (UTC)
Tata Young
Wikipedia entries should be written primarily in prose form, not as a list of information or facts (that would be in an almanac.) Please re-work your addition to the Tata Young page using prose, or choose another Wiki page to work on by adding prose.
- DJKS 14:17, 28 Jul 2004 (UTC)
SLAM
Thanks for helping with the internal links. I like what you added about Services, but you should revise this section for an external audience (it reads like it is for a St. Louis audience.) Other than that, the formating looks great.
- DJKS 14:20, 28 Jul 2004 (UTC)