Talk:Dead or Alive (video game)
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--S&T Kawaii Love 16:00, 9 Jul 2004 (UTC)
- This is a huge effort for someone not working in their native language and you deserve a lot of credit for coming back to it so much. However, I think you need to work on developing an NPOV style of writing. The spelling and grammar are easy for native speakers to tidy up but NPOV is harder to attain when one doesn't know the story as well as you do. Clearly, DOA fans can get emotive about their passion but you need to refrain from making allegations of things like bribery which are criminal acts. Any time I've deleted sentences, it's been when the meaning was unclear and looked like it might be hyperbole or unsubstantiated but there is still a lot of work to be done. Stick with it though and your writing will keep improving. Gest 13:39, 5 Aug 2004 (UTC)
Recent revert
I recently reverted from this edit (http://en.wikipedia.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Dead_or_Alive_%28video_game%29&oldid=5349218) to this edit (http://en.wikipedia.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Dead_or_Alive_%28video_game%29&oldid=5344979). Since there were several small changes (http://en.wikipedia.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=Dead_or_Alive_%28video_game%29&diff=0&oldid=5349218) made, I'll just explain my revert. Its wikipedia policy to link most important and relevent words, certainly sometimes articles go overboard, but things like mythology, assassin, sniper, amnesia, etc should be linked. Also, in text use "and" instead of "&". Lastly, the other edits were either incorrect or removed clarity or information from the text. —siroχo 15:53, Aug 21, 2004 (UTC)