Talk:Joachim II
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HJ -- for pity's sake, don't correct grammar unless there is really something to correct. If you want to fix things, try going into your own stuff, removing all the spaces before punctuation marks, adding spaces and articles where appropriate, and perhaps even using transition sentences.
- I vote for HJ going back and taking out spaces before punctuation marks, myself. When I figured out that some of the wacky commas in her entries came from cutting and pasting genealogical charts, where evidently a comma before a proper name means something, I almost hit the roof. --MichaelTinkler