Talk:Chilean coup of 1973

An event mentioned in this article is a September 11 selected anniversary.

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Talk:Chilean coup of 1973/Archive 1, mostly about (1) a much earlier state of the article and (2) the 1970 Chilean presidential election, now a separate article.

U.S. role

The only way we are going to NPOV this is to cite (conflicting) sources and indicate what they say. Right now we refer to documents declassified in particular years, but don't cite documents in any useful manner. I hold no brief for how the U.S. behaved: they certainly welcomed the coup, doubtless played a major role in creating the circumstances that led to a coup, and probably in some degree backed the coup materially, but it's a controversial matter and we should have better documentation (including any appropriate documentation of contrary beliefs). The fact that an article leans toward one's own views in a controversial matter shouldn't reduce one's standards of proof.

On the basis of what is present in the section "US role in 1973 coup", I think the wording in the lead overstates the case. The lead says, "the Chilean armed forces, with the backing of the US government, overthrew... [Allende]]". The section "US role in 1973 coup" suggest thats this may be too strong a wording. -- Jmabel 21:22, Jun 11, 2004 (UTC)

I suggest that a prerequisite for such additions is that users such as 172 and VV grow up and start behave as adults. There is little use in serious contributing to these articles as long as these editors cut away whatever they feel damage their propagandist agenda. /Tuomas 14:17, 12 Jun 2004 (UTC)

capital flight

In many of the histories I've seen of Chile, it's said that during the Allende years one of the chief causes of economic problems was the flight of foreign and domestic capital to other countries following the beginning of the reform programs. This was both the natural capitalist response in order to maximise profits and also a concerted effort to destabilize the country along the lines Kissinger discussed. However, I don't have references or in-depth knowledge. This is not discussed in any of the relevant articles: History of Chile, Salvador Allende, etc. Does anybody have information on this topic? Thanks! DanKeshet 20:37, 20 Jun 2004 (UTC)

Good catch, Dan! I brought this up once, but I don't remember if it was a talk page comment or an article edit. We should definitely mention the effects of capital flight on the Chilean economy in the 3 years leading up to the coup of 1973.

Have any economic or political scholars discussed this issue? Has any "capitalist" said something like the following?

Serves him right, that no good Allende, for trying to steal from the rich (copper mine nationalization) and give to the poor (socialism).

Or have any socialists blamed foreign investors?

Those greedy capitalists deliberately sabotaged the Chilean economy just to make an excuse to have a coup and throw out Allende. Everything was going fine until then.

It probably is not as simple as "Nixon got the CIA to overthrow Allende so his buddies could get rich". On the other hand, if that's a popular viewpoint, than that POV should go into the article. --Uncle Ed 22:35, 20 Jun 2004 (UTC)

...and other matters

I've probably done about all I will in this article by way of major additions for a while, although I do still plan to look over Allende's response to the August 22 document (http://www.josepinera.com/pag/pag_tex_respallende.htm) and see what can be used.

Here's what I'd urge someone else to take up next:

I think the now-separate article about the 1970 Chilean presidential election needs more material on the various efforts to prevent Allende taking power, and this article then needs to give a quick summary of that
I agree that capital flight should be discussed, as should more specific accounts of Allende's economic policies.
We could use more on agrarian reform.
We could probably have more on the various street demonstrations and the gradual break between the elected government and the military. After all, that's a big part of the story of the coup.
Closely related, we should have more about the accelerating cycle of violence by the radical left and right. There were a lot of political assassinations in this period, and they are not yet covered in the article (nor is there an account of the appalling murders in the immediate wake of the coup, when tens of thousands were herded into the soccer stadium and thousands were killed, among them Victor Jara.

Thanks to Baloo rch for turning up multiple useful documents. -- Jmabel 23:24, Jun 20, 2004 (UTC)

Citation on US involvement in coup

From a review of The Pinochet File in Foreign Affairs:

But what is very clear in all of this is that the coup in Chile is exactly what Kissinger's boss wanted. As Nixon put it in his ineffable style, "It's that son of a bitch Allende. We're going to smash him." As early as October of 1970, the CIA had warned of possible consequences: "you have asked us to provoke chaos in Chile. ... We provide you with a formula for chaos which is unlikely to be bloodless. To dissimulate the U.S. involvement will be clearly impossible." [1] (http://www.foreignaffairs.org/20031101fareviewessay82615/kenneth-maxwell/the-other-9-11-the-united-states-and-chile-1973.html)

-- Viajero 00:14, 3 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Recent insertion of POV

The recent edits by User:200.68.31.209 strike me as little but insertion of POV. I am inclined to revert them all, but as a major author of this inevitably controversial article, I'm hesitant to unilaterally prevent other voices. Do others agree with me on reverting this? Do you see anything in these edits worth salvaging? Maybe some additional content for the section on what was believed by supporters of the coup? -- Jmabel 05:11, Jul 4, 2004 (UTC)

Maybe his edits, or a substantial share of them, in this and correponding articles could be rephrased in wikipedia weasel term style. Of course it would have been much better if that pov could have been given references and quotations, but that might be too much to ask for - initially. /Tuomas 06:19, 4 Jul 2004 (UTC)

I gather this is sarcasm, but I'm not sure what your point is. Again, I'd have no objection to expanding the section on what was believed by supporters of the coup, but permeating the article with POV is another matter. There is probably at this point a slight bias (in selection of material) in favor of Allende, and I'd love to see it balanced better, but by adding relevant material, not by slanting the writing. -- Jmabel 06:39, Jul 4, 2004 (UTC)

Of course it was POV, of the ugliest nature, and I have removed it. --Cantus 06:24, 4 Jul 2004 (UTC)

"even though"

The reason I took "even though" out of the sentence re: the CIA paying the coup officials is because there is no evidence that the CIA was opposed to the torture as "even though" implies. "because" would be a much better connector. The CIA (and the US generally) "established the conditions" for the coup; they gave quite a bit of aid to the military generally (meaning they know who they were), and they generally praised it. Their School of the Americas has taught many "anti-torture" classes on torture techniques among Latin American torturers. There is no reason to infer that they were opposed to the torture. DanKeshet 15:15, 10 Jul 2004 (UTC)

The even though alludes to the supposition that the CIA perhaps should not have worked with contacts with human rights problems but did anyway. Because is ridiculous. And yes of course they were opposed to torture; don't be absurd. The use of such contacts was a subject of fierce debate back then. VV[[]] 20:00, 10 Jul 2004 (UTC)

broader U.S. reservations?

I removed this phrase:

and in fact that many CIA officers shared broader U.S. reservations about Pinochet's single-minded pursuit of power.

Yes, I know it is on the first page of the report. What "broader U.S. reservations?" Can someone substantiate this vague statement? -- Viajero 05:44, 14 Jul 2004 (UTC)

The text merely states what the report concluded, which is useful information. Anyway, it's clear what it means, no? VV[[]] 05:59, 14 Jul 2004 (UTC)

It probably means "Pinochet sure is useful to us but he's going so far that we'll look bad if some of these facts come to light." JamesMLane 06:37, 14 Jul 2004 (UTC)

Global recession

The article doesn't really mention the global recession/oil crunch at all - it mentions the hyperinflation in Chile, but then doesn't say that there was global (near) hyper-inflation at the time. I don't know if it's relevant (don't know enouygh about the Chilaen exposure to oil in 1972) but surely it's relevant.

The disputed description of the link

The page has been protected because of a dispute between two different ways of describing this link (http://www.gwu.edu/~nsarchiv/latin_america/chile.htm):

"which provides documents obtained from FOIA requests regarding the US's support for the coup and Pinochet" or

"which provides documents obtained from FOIA requests regarding US attempts to promote a coup in 1970".

The edit summaries are a little sparse in terms of actually discussing this issue. The most substantive is that of Jmabel, who said, in support of the second version, "Pinochet has nothing significant to do with that matter". If "that matter" is the 1970 coup, I'd agree, but the link is not by any means limited to 1970. If you go to the site, you find a list of the materials available there. The list includes:

"Chile and the United States: Declassified Documents Related to the Military Coup of September 11, 1973"
"CIA Acknowledges Ties to Pinochet’s Repression: Chilean Secret Police Chief was a CIA Asset"
"On 25th Anniversary of Chilean Coup, Documents Detail Abuses by Chilean Military, U.S. Role in Chile" (dated 1998, so referring to 1973 not 1970).

On this basis, I believe the first description quoted above is clearly correct. The documents provided at that site do concern the US's support for the 1973 coup and for Pinochet. JamesMLane 04:19, 9 Oct 2004 (UTC)

The website mislabels some of the information. The U.S. had no role in the 1973 coup, contrary to rumors. Very Verily 23:30, 9 Oct 2004 (UTC)

Interesting. Without following up the link, I had made the mistake of presuming that the person who originally added the link had characterized it correctly, that it referred only to 1970, and that Pinochet was therefore a red herring. But, yes, now that I follow the link, it looks like ""support for Pinochet" is a perfectly accurate description of part of what it covers. Sorry, guess I made a mistake, although I will add that it didn't help any that the person who made the change failed to explain the nature of the factual correction. -- Jmabel 07:35, Oct 9, 2004 (UTC)

Jmabel, I agree with your last sentence, except that the unhelpful behavior came from both camps. On one side, VV kept reverting in support of his position in a good-faith content dispute and gave the misleading edit summary "rv vandal". In doing so, VV was in keeping with the regrettable and widespread tendency, which has been seen in edit summaries by him and in edit summaries by people reverting him, to use "vandalism" to mean "an edit with which I disagree". On the other hand, the anon(s) reverting VV in this instance didn't provide even a misleading edit summary. Which of these objectionable approaches is more objectionable is left as an exercise for the frustrated reader. JamesMLane 10:58, 9 Oct 2004 (UTC)

Yes, I probably more-or-less unconsciously took VV's edit summary at face value, since the other person wasn't refuting it. -- Jmabel 18:47, Oct 9, 2004 (UTC)

I called the user a vandal because the user is a vandal. I did not call the edit vandalism. The anon user (who logs in as Turrican) in question vandalized my user page several times and then began reverting all the edits I make to various articles. I agree that the trend towards calling good faith edits vandalism is an unfortunate one, which I myself resist taking part in, but this is not such an instance. Very Verily 23:30, 9 Oct 2004 (UTC)

So am I to understand that when you write "rv vandal", I should never assume that you have reverted vandalism and that you are simply making a disparaging remark about the previous editor? Normally, when I see a remark like that from an experienced wikipedian, I take it as an indication that I probably don't need to look at the edit, as (I'm sure) do a lot of other people. I would say that (1) if you believed that the edit in question was not vandalism, this at least borders on a deliberately misleading edit summary. -- Jmabel 23:51, Oct 9, 2004 (UTC)

That user vandalized my user page multiple times (see page history of User:VeryVerily or this version (http://en.wikipedia.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=User:VeryVerily&oldid=6378586)) and went through my contributions and started reverting them all. I reverted back with the edit summary "rv vandal", I believe a wholly appropriate description. Maybe you would feel differently if someone called you a "disgusting Nazi", posted implicit death threats, and pasted swastikas on your user page; in that case you get the "WikiLove" award. Not me. And, no, there was no need to look at that edit. If you want to track all the edits recently made to an article, the page history is available, and where I first made the edit in question is documented without allusion to vandalism. Very Verily 00:34, 10 Oct 2004 (UTC)

I agree that there's a distinction between "vandal" and "vandalism" and that I overlooked that point in characterizing your summaries. I retract my comment to that extent. Nevertheless, "rv vandal" is not an adequate edit summary when it's obvious that there's a good-faith content dispute. Whether or not the anon user was the one who vandalized your user page, even a vandal can make some good-faith edits when not vandalizing. Many people would read your summary the way Jmabel suggests above. I adhere to my view that neither side in the revert war adequately discussed the issues before the page was protectd. JamesMLane 23:57, 9 Oct 2004 (UTC)

I explained my edit when I initially made it. Whether it was adequate is a separate question, but until now it was not challenged except by the vandal. Very Verily 00:09, 10 Oct 2004 (UTC)

"Left-wing" opposition

One of the subjects of multiple reverts is the passage describing Pinochet's conduct immediately after the coup. Why should we say that he moved to crush "left-wing" opposition? That might be defensible if, for example, certain parties had been outlawed, and their members expelled from Congress, if they were charged with being Communists or Communist sympathizers or whatever. What the paragraph says, however, is that the junta dissolved Congress. Left-wing, right-wing, centrist, all opposition was crushed. Obviously, people on the left were more likely to oppose the dictatorship, but I don't see any justification for specifying "left-wing". We should just say that he moved to solidify his position against any opposition. JamesMLane 05:36, 18 Oct 2004 (UTC)

concur -- Jmabel | Talk 19:24, Oct 18, 2004 (UTC)

You know, now that I look at that passage, I agreed too easily. Although Congress was dissolved, the only parties that were banned were the UP parties, that is those in Allende's coalition. The people herded into the National Stadium were almost uniformly leftists, as were the arrested and disappeared. Pinochet snubbed the traditional conservatives and the Christian Democrats, but he did indeed try to crush the left. There is a distinction here, and it should be made, albeit more clearly than the unclear phrase in the earlier version of the article. -- Jmabel | Talk 05:58, Oct 19, 2004 (UTC)

OK, I've taken another stab at it. I'd just prefer to avoid the phrase "left-wing" because I think it might, in some people's minds, marginalize the opposition -- as if, in the U.S., the government had arrested a few leaders of the Communist Party USA. Instead, I've tried to convey both ideas: that Pinochet moved to foreclose all opposition, and that his particular target was Allende's coalition. JamesMLane 06:17, 19 Oct 2004 (UTC)

Much better. -- Jmabel | Talk 07:59, Oct 19, 2004 (UTC)

Edit wars

Can we please try to use the talk page to sort out the various matters that keep going back and forth instead of engaging in edit wars? It looks to me like we have consensus now on one passage, at least among those of us who bother to state our views rather than make uncommented edits, or edits that are justified only by their view of the character of another editor.

One passage in the article as it stands at this writing says, "His personal doctor said that he committed suicide with a machine gun given to him by Fidel Castro, and an autopsy labelled his death as suicide, while others insist he was murdered by Pinochet's military forces while defending the palace." This breaks down to several assertions:

"His personal doctor said that he committed suicide": I'm pretty sure I've seen this from an entirely reliable source, though citation would be welcome.
"His personal doctor said that he committed suicide with a machine gun": I believe this, too, is true. Again, citation would be welcome.
"His personal doctor said that he committed suicide with a machine gun given to him by Fidel Castro". Well, I believe he did indeed own a machine gun given to him by Fidel Castro, but I don't believe his doctor said anything about that being the machine gun with which he killed himself. I'd want to remove this assertion unless it can be cited.
"an autopsy labelled his death as suicide": I believe this is true. Again, citation would be welcome.
"...while others insist he was murdered by Pinochet's military forces..." Certainly a true statement, but citations of who says this would be in order.

I also suspect there is more to say in the matter, like whether the autopsy was performed by anyone who should be considered a trustworthy source and whether Allende's doctor (1) made this statement on the basis of first-hand knowledge or just hearsay (i.e. did he actually see the death scene and/or the body) and (2) made this assertion in a context where he could be presumed free of coercion.

Clearly there are other passages at issue. I'd welcome similar summaries of what is at issue on the others. This matter should not be settled by who has the most endurance at reverting edits. -- Jmabel | Talk 23:41, Oct 19, 2004 (UTC)

Just to note, most of the revert warring is due to the user Turrican, who is anonymously reverting edits of mine largely at random as well as (formerly?) vandalizing my user page repeatedly, all with personal attacks. One of his IPs was blocked, but he switches to others. Just revert him on sight. The information about Fidel Castro needs to be cited and possibly clarified by rephrasing, but what is there is fairly sound. I agree the additional information you seek would help as well. Very Verily 23:49, 19 Oct 2004 (UTC)

As is evident from my most recent and somewhat bilious edit summary, I agree wholeheartedly with Jmabel. I do not agree with "revert him on sight" as a policy. VV has a pending arbitration request re Turrican, but until the ArbCom acts, neither VV nor anyone else is authorized to declare that Turrican is a free-fire zone and his edits can be reverted without being read. JamesMLane 00:11, 20 Oct 2004 (UTC)

I imagine you might feel differently if this (http://en.wikipedia.org/w/wiki.phtml?title=User:VeryVerily&oldid=6378586) was done to your user page. Also, all of his edits for quite some time have just been reverts, usually of me. And yes I can revert him, it's a wiki. Very Verily 08:34, 27 Oct 2004 (UTC)

Back on that "personal doctor" thing

I've edited slightly (per discussion above) and cited some sources, but where exactly does the vague, uncited claim, "His personal doctor said that he committed suicide with a machine gun" come from? Róbinson Rojas The murder of Allende (http://www.rrojasdatabank.org/murder10.htm) available online but published in 1975 by Harper and Row says Allende's personal doctor was Enrique Paris. Is this in dispute? Rojas gives an account of Allende's death as murder, not suicide, with Paris supposedly arriving moments later.

I'm not saying I unquestioningly trust Rojas's account, I'm just saying it casts doubt on our statement about what Allende's personal doctor may have said, so I would really like to see a comparably respectable citation for Wikipedia's version: I've looked, and I can't find a thing. (BTW, Paris himself appears later to have been arrested and killed [2] (http://www.chipsites.com/derechos/1997_eng.html); his son, who has the same name is still alive, so be careful in any checking of sources to know which one is meant). -- Jmabel | Talk 05:52, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)

One of his doctors, Patricio Guijon, was found with the body by the military. According to the witnesses, Allende had ordered a capitulation, and he stayed at the end of the line of the people leaving, entered to the independence hall and commited suicide. Only Dr Guijon came back after noticing that Allende was not there, and found him dead, with the gun between his legs. For a long time his was the only account, apart from the autopsy, that he had commited suicide. Another doctor from the group, Jose Quiroga, revealed in 1988 that he had also witnessed the suicide, as told in a couple of paragraphs here (http://www.garella.com/rich/eric/exile.htm) and here (http://www.oberlin.edu/faculty/svolk/lat102200.htm). On september 11 2003 he said in another interview that there were a total of six witnesses to Allende's suicide, that they saw him through the smoke and the antigas mask. And that they didn't say anything because they thought it was important that Allende was considered to have been killed by the military. The interview is in Spanish, in a Los Angeles newspaper La Opinion (http://www.laopinion.com/archivo/index.html?START=1&RESULTSTART=1&DISPLAYTYPE=single&FREETEXT=quiroga&FDATEd12=&FDATEd13=&SORT_MODE=SORT_MODE) No serious person talks about Allende being directly killed by the military anymore. --AstroNomer 15:35, Jan 8, 2005 (UTC)

POV again

Johdl, who has obviously done a ton of research, recently added a large amount of generally good material to this article, his/her first contribution to Wikipedia, at least under that name. Unfortunately, a lot of his/her writing was very POV; I'm trying to remove the more blatant POV sentences (which mostly just overtly restate in POV terms facts that speak for themselves). -- Jmabel | Talk 00:43, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)

Factor out Chile under Pinochet?

A lot of what Johdl has written seems to cover a much broader historical period than the coup itself. We've been slowly accumulating a lot of material on the history of Chile (here and elsewhere, including -- surprise! -- History of Chile). Maybe the time has come to do a proper article series on the History of Chile, as was earlier (prematurely) proposed? If so, a lot of this would probably move to an article on Chile under Pinochet or some such, because it's not really about the coup. Johdl, if you are checking this page, would you agree to that? -- Jmabel | Talk 00:43, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)

And some of this probably belongs in a new article Chile under Allende, too. Which is to say, there is a lot of good material here, but it doesn't all belong in an article on the coup itself. -- Jmabel | Talk 00:56, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)

I have fixed the Debray reference, I am assuming that is the only one I omitted? I checked the references fairly carefully (I added quite a few) and I must have failed to see the reference in the text and thus deleted the reference (because I thought it wasn't referred to in the text).

I am happy with the stuff I have added. You are free to delete the section "Chile under Pinochet" if you don't think it's relevant to this article. You can place it somewhere else or delete it altogether if you wish.

I would appreciate if you left alone the paragraphs I have added in the other sections. I added a bit about Chile under Frei throughout the article because what happened under Frei was directly relevant to what happened to the economy under Allende. I have also added a bit to the section on US involvement. If you want to change some of that I don't mind you doing so, but I'd appreciate it if we had a discussion about what you want to change before you change it. I referred to a couple of the documents Clinton released which were not previously referenced in the article.

Let's have a discussion about what you want to change. I have directly quoted Karamessines and Kissinger. I think these cables proves that the US was plotting behind the scenes for a coup to happen (was it Karamessines who said it is essential that the US Government's role be well hidden?).

As for the references, as far as I know there are none missing (now that I have fixed the Debray reference as requested).

Regards. Joh.

Much of the material in this article clearly doesn't belong here. Discussion of post-coup Chile is appropriate only to the extent that it represents the "mopping-up" phase of the coup, including the arrests of the junta's opponents and the dissolution of Congress. I suggest that the rest be moved immediately to History of Chile (with, of course, a wikilink here). Similarly, the lengthy discussion of the Allende years doesn't belong here. What's appropriate is a much shorter section that would give the highlights of the origins of the opposition to Allende. We have an article on Salvador Allende, although that should be primarily a biography and most of the information about the government's policies during the 1970-73 period should also be moved (initially) to History of Chile.

There would then be the separate question of whether History of Chile was getting long enough to justify spinning off daughter articles to cover some of the particular time periods. As matters stand, History of Chile has fairly detailed sections on History of Chile#1970-1973 and History of Chile#1973-1978; much of what's in this coup article unnecessarily duplicates the information there, e.g., the involvement of the Chicago School economists and the results of their policies. JamesMLane 06:21, 27 Oct 2004 (UTC)

I've agreed that the Post coup section can go. I will remove it as soon as I finish typing this message. I disagree about removing the discussion of the Allende years. You say it doesn't belong here, I disagree, because it is directly relevant to why the coup happened. It should stay in the article, otherwise you end up with a short article about the coup itself and no explanation of what led to it or what the conditions were that led to it. I am off to delete the post-coup stuff. It can go elsewhere, but I won't touch the information that directly refers to the reasons for the coup happening. That is necessary background to the reason this article exists in the first place. Regards. Joh.

OK I have removed the Post-coup section from this article. With it goes the following references: Roberts, Valdes, Contreras, Remmer, Sznajder, Petras & Vieux, Schatan, and Christian. I won't touch the article again as I am happy with its contents. If you want anything else removed let's discuss it. Regards. Joh.

By saying remove from the article, I certainly didn't mean remove from Wikipedia. Give or take some too-POV wordings, this is good stuff. It just needs to be factored out to a more appropriate place. -- Jmabel | Talk 06:50, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)

I've now moved it all to Chile under Pinochet -- Jmabel | Talk 07:04, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)

With regard to the post-coup material, I completely agree with preserving it, and I think Chile under Pinochet is a good way to go. As for the pre-coup period, I agree that the scene has to be set, but what we have is too detailed. Much of it would belong either in History of Chile or in a new daughter article, Chile under Allende. I set up a sandbox to facilitate the process of keeping the basics necessary for this article. You can see it at User:JamesMLane/Temp:Chilean coup. I began by copying the material now in the section on "Situation before the coup" in Chilean coup of 1973, and then editing it, so you can see what I did. Even with these cuts, I think it may be too detailed. I'll try to revisit it and see how it looks when I'm not immersed in it, but in the meantime, everyone is invited to edit it or to discuss it. JamesMLane 08:59, 27 Oct 2004 (UTC)

I'm probably going to trust others to work out this scene-setting part unless I'm explicitly asked for my help. Just remember to move/copy references in parallel with moving/copying other material. -- Jmabel | Talk 22:51, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)

Summarizing my edits downstream of Joh

I've made a number of edits. I don't think any of them are drastic. I've kept 100% of Joh's citations. Mostly I have:

Rearranged so that overview statements come at the start and end of sections
Tried to remove phrases and sentences that do nothing but add POV (e.g. "It is important to note that...")

At this point I am pretty happy with what we have (with the one exception about Debray, noted below), although I suspect that some people well to my (and, I presume from his choice of sources, Joh's) political right are going to want to add information from some different sources. Again, more of this may eventually end up summarized here and rendered in full elsewhere: that's part of the usual process of growth of an article. This article has now had at least two good articles factored out (1970 Chilean presidential election and Chile under Pinochet). -- Jmabel | Talk 07:55, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)

Regis Debray

The thing here that most gives me pause in terms of POV is the paraphrase of Regis Debray, a very partisan source. I'd rather see a direct quote (or even an indirect quote) from Debray, explicitly presented as such in the article, rather than paraphrasing him in the article's narrative voice. Joh, is there one single apropos quote from Debray that says most of what you use here (I notice your reference has a single page number, so I'm hopeful). If not, we can use indirect quotation style. Either way, it should be made clear that terms like "organised financial panic" and "terrorism" (this last being a word we usually try to use very sparingly) are Debray's, not those of the narrative voice of the article. -- Jmabel | Talk 07:55, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)

Debray removed

OK I deleted that whole paragraph (and the reference). I also have a copy of Allende's first speech to the Chilean parliament after his election (speech was 21 May 1971). If someone wants to format it and post it in the history of Chile section you are welcome to do so. You can find a copy here...

Inaugural speech and other Allende-years matters

http://users.bigpond.net.au/ftr/allende_speech.html

It's on the public record in Chile so there should be no problem posting it here. There is no copyright for it. I copied it word for word from a 30 year old pamphlet in the University library a couple of years ago.

Regards. Joh.

Joh, thanks for just removing that, it probably will make all of this less contentious.
The speech would be more appropriate for Wikisource and/or source.wikipedia.org, and any mention of it probably belongs either in the article 1970 Chilean presidential election or the new scene-setting one JamesMLane has started (which I'd suggest titling Chile under Allende by analogy to the Chile under Pinochet that I just started with your material). You might want to take a look at the second link in section Chilean_coup_of_1973#Allende_responds, which links to my translation of Allende's last speech.
By the way, the easiest way to sign your comments here is with ~~~~, which will add your username (linked to your user page) and a timestamp. Makes it clearer what's going on.

Jmabel | Talk 23:06, Oct 27, 2004 (UTC)

I agree about putting the speech on Wikisource. Just to clarify, my sandbox at User:JamesMLane/Temp:Chilean coup isn't intended to be the new article. It's my first draft of the "Allende years" section of this article. That's why I cut out some detail. My suggestion is that the sandbox or something like it be substituted into this article. The full level of detail about 1970-73 from the current version of this article would be preserved, but in a separate article. Most of it would be in History of Chile or, as Jmabel suggests, at a new article called Chile under Allende. For the specific election information, like the table of votes, 1970 Chilean presidential election would be a more appropriate place. JamesMLane 01:02, 28 Oct 2004 (UTC)

I've created that Chile under Allende article with material from here, so people can feel free to edit down in this article. Please don't remove from this article any of the material about Congress's accusation and Allende's response: that is directly germane to the coup, and the Chile under Allende article merely summarizes it and refers to this article as the main place it is covered. -- Jmabel | Talk 06:44, Oct 29, 2004 (UTC)

Similarly, I have copied to U.S. intervention in Chile all of the relevant information from this article; I've also organized it a bit better there than it was here. I am pretty certain that my copy was without loss of information, but I might have missed something. Feel free to check on me! In any case, the intent is that information about U.S. involvement that might exceed what is relevant to this article on the coup can be edited down without any fear that it will be lost to Wikipedia. -- Jmabel | Talk 08:11, Oct 29, 2004 (UTC)

Links

I added a link on the page to the wikisource article (http://wikisource.org/wiki/Salvador_Allende:_First_speech_to_the_Chilean_parliament_after_his_election) containing the May 1971 speech to Congress. I also added it on the Salvador Allende (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Salvador_Allende) page. If you notice a few edits, it was just me trying to get the link working. For some reason it took a few attempts. Anyway, the link is working now. I also borrowed some of your links from this page and added them to the wikisource article.

I also added full given names in the references section for those whose full names I could find (replacing the initials).

Regards, Johdl 22:19, 28 Oct 2004 (UTC)

grammar

A recent edit by User:Trey Stone ended up with a sentence beginning "Later, Kissinger The CIA provided funding and propaganda support to political opponents..." I'm not sure what he meant here, so I can't fix it. -- Jmabel | Talk 07:58, Nov 13, 2004 (UTC)

Opposing views of the coup

While some of User:Martin Wisse's recent edits to "Opposing views of the coup" may be legitimate, others are clearly blatant POV. We can not, in the narrative voice of the article, call a view "ridiculous and hypocritical". If this came from an anonymous user, I would simply revert without reading more closely. Also, why single out one particular victim just because he happened to be a U.S. citizens? Martin, can you please re-read what you wrote and see if you can do an NPOV version of your recent work yourself? -- Jmabel | Talk 21:31, Dec 14, 2004 (UTC)

I took the "ridiculous and hypocritical" line from the previous version of the article. I'm not sure I agree with your view that the narrative voice of an article should not call something this if it is ridiculous and hypocritical, but neither am I opposed to making it clearer this view is of course held by the coup's critics and opponents.

The Charles Horman article was linked to because it was a clear, well known example of the consequences of the coup, making it somewhat more immediate.

I myself do not find my altercations to be non-NPOV and made them because I felt the previous version of this section was too mealy mouthed, too much "he said, she said" rather than NPOV, making it look as if the arguments by the coupists and their opponents have equal weight, when they in fact pit hypothetical dangers against actual facts. --Martin Wisse 21:41, 14 Dec 2004 (UTC)

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